Mom

Where were you when i needed you
Through the heart aches and pain
I always cried for you and you
Never came to my rescue and save me 
I waited by the door and the window
Day and night sometimes i stayed up
I was waiting for us to have that girl talk
It never happen  and i hate that 
Now i am grown up i just wish 
that you will love me so that i 
will not be alone and without 
you physically and mentally
I miss you holding me and telling 
me things will become better
 for us and we are a team with the 
boys they was the impact on my life
they gave me strength when you did'nt
I so thankful for them but even more thankful 
for my mom i never got to know          



By Shequitta Mitchell
9/23/10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Palli Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Can feel the heartache. Well done.
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November 1, 2010 at 9:28 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shequitta. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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November 1, 2010 at 4:51 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write today ..with its very impressive theme.. touching piece..luv... hope u enjoy your time on the Soup and will check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..
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October 31, 2010 at 1:53 PM
a beautiful emotion filled poem..good job!
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