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Molten Gold - a Monoku

river of molten gold seeking glorious heights Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved Placed No. 8 in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku - Single Line" Contest - Jun 2011

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Date: 6/9/2011 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Rick Parise's "Nature Monoku" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:23:00 PM
Wonderful win, Robert. COngratulations to you.
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:01:00 AM
Sweet and glowing, short.. yet deep.! congratulations Robert on the win.!
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Date: 6/5/2011 5:59:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Sara
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Date: 6/4/2011 2:55:00 PM
congrad's on your win Bob! Light & Love
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Date: 6/3/2011 8:35:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your super win with this creative entry for Rick.. well done my friend..luv.
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Date: 6/3/2011 6:30:00 PM
Awesome entry, Sarge. Excellent monoku. Good luck. Ralphie
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Date: 6/2/2011 8:31:00 AM
A great entry for the contest Bob. Many thanks for your comments. Best wishes to you in the contest. Em :)
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:50:00 PM
wow! Enough said.. excellent line,,, Enjoyed and good luck,..p.d.
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:16:00 PM
very creative, enjoyed reading this one, good luck in the contest. Thank you for commenting on Glow Worm in Love, glad you liked it.
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Date: 6/1/2011 9:41:00 AM
This is very relaxing too...molten gold is a captivating description of the picture, Robert! Well done! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:39:00 AM
a golden taspestry of a write, robert.. jus did mine too.. come visit! winning's best! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:34:00 AM
Great Monoku here Robert.enjoyed.
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Date: 6/1/2011 12:35:00 AM
great monoku Luv*Skat
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Date: 5/31/2011 8:59:00 PM
wow,I like how you did this! and I enjoyed your taco stories! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/31/2011 5:57:00 PM
I never heard of a one line poem - interesting. Mike
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