Molon Labe

Coticular seeds.. ''articulate'' splendiferous coruscate! (beside outer) & close to 
existence. Intimation beyond reason urges..!whispering as irises sparkle, 
''exuding'' oh..! humanity... Ekeing on) as existence seeps.... 

And entity itself moves in a churning..on the wind, (as ignited the ether) writes your 
being come..! and all oppertunley, archane may yet be.! Circles of eternity play..
disporting in the beauty of (becoming created) dancing effervescence...wakes unseen...)

copyright Joe Maverick 2011 3rd/7th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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D. Avatar
November 13, 2015 at 10:55 AM
read it
A   Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Good morning Joe..stopping by to greet you with a happy fathers day...always..pd
Culverhouse Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 5:22 AM
I bought this old seed catalogue from 1928 and it has poetry in it describing the flowers....it is wonderful. It also has color picutures....it is amazing to see the prices back then.
Culverhouse Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 5:20 AM
Wow.....lovely....reminds me of my day yesterday....transplanting flowers from moms to my yard....poem to come....
Wesley Avatar
January 25, 2012 at 10:28 AM
What a vocabulary Joe, language is wonderful and how lucky we are to have the expression we do ou our mother tongue. Where are you? Time you came out of hiding!
Guzzi Avatar
January 12, 2012 at 5:44 PM
well..;) a fine use of language and actually in its own way about the same topic as Foriegn Exchange ..life birth, growth...Light & Love
Wesley Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 9:32 AM
I'm chewing on this in order to digest! Astounding choice of enigmatic words to keep the reader wondering. Waking unseen would be a bonus for me!
Maverick Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 4:57 PM
i am overwhelmed by your considerate words on my write Lizzie many thanks..
Mister Roboto Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 5:09 PM
Thank god for Google! I won't lie and pretend I know all your words. I DiGG the Originality and Joe Cool deliverY! Thx 4 commenting!
Guzzi Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 10:44 AM
So much to wonder about , the words tingle and pop in your mouth as they are recited! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 10:16 AM
I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Joe. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 12:56 PM
Joe....I missed this one somehow. Just stopped by to say hello. Miss ya!
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 12:24 AM
just stopping here to say hello to you! thanks for your comment, my friend.
Guzzi Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:20 PM
wow that's a mouth full of marvelous verbage!! Thanks for your kind comments. Light & Love
Ross Jr. Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:40 PM
Excellent write very creative and insightful...God bless...old Jack
A   Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 7:34 AM
Hi, Joe,, very interesting.... umm maybe a wake call.... thanks for sharing,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 7:06 PM
thankxx Joe .. always os wonderful to read u as well luv..
Devonshire Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Very thought-provoking, Joe, and an interesting use of word choice as well. Love the idea of an entity churning "on the wind" and becoming poetry. Well said, my friend. Love, Carolyn
Wesley Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 6:13 PM
So descriptive and deep - circles of eternity - fascinating!
Ball Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 5:49 PM
I like the way you make the reader pay strict attention to what they are reading. If-n ah don't yah loses me. I liked this very much. Thanks for sharing. God Bless, JB
Fiery Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 12:21 PM
you have a knack for good words...i liked this very much. thanx for ur lovely comments on my poems
Haick Avatar
July 7, 2011 at 9:50 AM
Profound and beautiful! Great write as usual. Always, Annalise
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July 5, 2011 at 5:36 AM
what new knowledge and perspective you bring, joe... a riddle and a delight! :) huggs, nette
Kendrick Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Interesting work that you have penned..Sara
Ball Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 10:47 AM
Hmmmmm WoW! A very thought provoking piece my friend. One you really have to pay attention to if you're going to read it. It's a good write, an excellent piece, I really did like it, but one would think you swallowed a dictionary. No offense intended. God Bless my friend, JB
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2011 at 11:46 PM
What a lovely phrase, Joe "dancing effervescance wakes unseen" I googled Molon Labe becuase I had not heard of it before. YOu should put notes for that kind of thing. It is very informative to know such a phrase!
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