Mold

I bit into a berry
And discovered hidden mold.
Its outside looked unblemished
As it did when it was sold.

I spit it out and wondered
How it fooled me with its coat.
Appearances deceive; the chance
Of mold seemed quite remote.

I guess that’s true with people, too.
Despite how they appear,
Beneath the surface they might be
Both mean and insincere.

It doesn’t take too long to find
What’s lurking out of sight;
And oftentimes, the truth comes out
With just a single bite.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:24 AM
Who knew mold could inspire such musings. You are such an enjoyable read ilene. Why do you write your name with a small i. Just curious.
Merryman Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 3:47 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Ilene! It amazes me how you can take just about any ordinary topic and turn it into a fantastic poem. Love, KIm
Pettit Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Tom Hanks in "Forrest Gump" said, "Life is like a box of chocolates. You don't know what you're going to get." Apparently, that box of chocolates was not a Whitman's Sampler which has a diagram under the lid. Good poem.
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 11:06 AM
Hi Ilene-Love that this has deeper meaning. Clever.
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 9:31 AM
wow, you SAID a mouthful (of mold) here. I can so relate to this because I've come across some really moldy folks in my time. You nailed it!
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