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Molasses

hope for my cure flowing like molasses . . .feeling now nearly tapped out Aug 25, 2020 for Silent One's "When Plans Dont Go To Plan" Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/6/2020 11:43:00 AM
We need a “cure-all.” <3 Well said
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Date: 8/30/2020 7:14:00 PM
Andrea, I wish you the very best of health now and in the future. Superb work. Congratulations on your medal win. Howard
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Date: 8/30/2020 3:15:00 PM
Great flow of imagery in this line, Andrea. Congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 8/29/2020 1:17:00 PM
- Congratulations on your great winning line, Andrea :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/29/2020 10:54:00 AM
Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Andrea . Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/29/2020 5:34:00 AM
Don't ever give up, Andrea! Hope should be the last to seep out! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 8/29/2020 4:21:00 AM
Nice play on the word "tapped," Andrea. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/29/2020 4:18:00 AM
Big hug, Andrea. Line x
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Date: 8/29/2020 3:33:00 AM
If only it was so simple, sadly it is not and many suffer... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/28/2020 11:53:00 PM
You have my prayers daily, my friend. I am sorry that this has gone on for way too long or even at all. Well penned.
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Date: 8/27/2020 11:12:00 AM
I know you have not given up, but the wait is frustrating. Nice write for SO's contest.
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Date: 8/27/2020 10:28:00 AM
Best wishes for health, well expressed in your Monoku!
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Date: 8/26/2020 6:26:00 AM
Blessings my friend. Wishing you a speedy recovery.
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Date: 8/25/2020 1:37:00 PM
Know the feeling Andrea, best wishes...
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Date: 8/25/2020 1:37:00 PM
Touching line resonates pain that many suffer -- you gave them voice as well Andrea--telling your story. Very apt for the theme.
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Date: 8/25/2020 1:30:00 PM
This is so sad! :((((( aka effective ink! x
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Date: 8/25/2020 11:58:00 AM
Hello Andrea, i will pray for you to. By the way I put molasses on ice cream The vanilla flavour. I enjoy the taste of it. Let me know how you are doing. Thank you. Hugs. Darlene.
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Date: 8/25/2020 11:16:00 AM
Great one Andrea! :)
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Date: 8/25/2020 10:22:00 AM
I hope you have a cure that works my friend. I'll pray. God Bless, JB
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