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Molasses

hope for my cure flowing like molasses . . .feeling now nearly tapped out


Aug 25, 2020 for Silent One's "When Plans Dont Go To Plan" Poetry Contest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/6/2020 11:43:00 AM

We need a “cure-all.” <3 Well said

Howard Kerr

Date: 8/30/2020 7:14:00 PM

Andrea, I wish you the very best of health now and in the future. Superb work. Congratulations on your medal win. Howard

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 8/30/2020 3:15:00 PM

Great flow of imagery in this line, Andrea. Congratulations on your win!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2020 1:17:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great winning line, Andrea :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/29/2020 10:54:00 AM

Great imagery in just one line Monoku, Andrea . Congratulations on your win.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/29/2020 5:34:00 AM

Don't ever give up, Andrea! Hope should be the last to seep out! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/29/2020 4:21:00 AM

Nice play on the word "tapped," Andrea. Congratulations on your win!

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/29/2020 4:18:00 AM

Big hug, Andrea. Line x

Silent One

Date: 8/29/2020 3:33:00 AM

If only it was so simple, sadly it is not and many suffer... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/28/2020 11:53:00 PM

You have my prayers daily, my friend. I am sorry that this has gone on for way too long or even at all. Well penned.

John Watt

Date: 8/27/2020 11:12:00 AM

I know you have not given up, but the wait is frustrating. Nice write for SO's contest.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/27/2020 10:28:00 AM

Best wishes for health, well expressed in your Monoku!

Joe Dimino

Date: 8/26/2020 6:26:00 AM

Blessings my friend. Wishing you a speedy recovery.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/25/2020 1:37:00 PM

Know the feeling Andrea, best wishes...

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/25/2020 1:37:00 PM

Touching line resonates pain that many suffer -- you gave them voice as well Andrea--telling your story. Very apt for the theme.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 8/25/2020 1:30:00 PM

This is so sad! :((((( aka effective ink! x

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/25/2020 11:58:00 AM

Hello Andrea, i will pray for you to. By the way I put molasses on ice cream The vanilla flavour. I enjoy the taste of it. Let me know how you are doing. Thank you. Hugs. Darlene.