Moist Air

Fog again this day Air very heavy moist One lone bird chirping

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Brian Strand

Date: 8/18/2009 2:32:00 AM

Thank you for your welcome comments today Sara Rgds Brian

James Fraser

Date: 8/17/2009 10:34:00 AM

Come on, where are all the other birds. This little chappie is going to get lonely>>kool poem Sara>>James

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/17/2009 10:10:00 AM

Sara ~very well done what a picture you painted ,I love Haiku's Laura :0)

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 8/17/2009 7:31:00 AM

very pretty picture. feels like one of those mornings where the poem floats in the air and you capture it before it dissappears with the noon sun. also fog isn't generally one of my favorite natural phenomena but you managed to make it beautiful with the one bird chirping. thanks for sharing your morning thoughts Sara. -Yoni