Moist Air

Fog again this day
Air very heavy moist
One lone bird chirping
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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August 18, 2009 at 2:32 AM
Thank you for your welcome comments today Sara Rgds Brian
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August 17, 2009 at 10:34 AM
Come on, where are all the other birds. This little chappie is going to get lonely>>kool poem Sara>>James
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August 17, 2009 at 10:10 AM
Sara ~very well done what a picture you painted ,I love Haiku's Laura :0)
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August 17, 2009 at 7:31 AM
very pretty picture. feels like one of those mornings where the poem floats in the air and you capture it before it dissappears with the noon sun. also fog isn't generally one of my favorite natural phenomena but you managed to make it beautiful with the one bird chirping. thanks for sharing your morning thoughts Sara. -Yoni
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