Modesty

A floral parasol gave shade,
to features darkly fine and drawn.
No laugh lines marked her sweet facade,
a countenance both pale and wan.

She glided by the garden wall
and shed a tear, a wistful sigh;
the blossoms bent as if in awe,
the warblers chirped in sympathy.

I yearned to take her arm, to find
the reason for her dire distress,
but modesty prevailed.
Consumed with unrequited love
my passion full curtailed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George   Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 8:44 PM
beautiful keith. so nice to see you here posting again. I love poetry. Hope all is well with you. Lainie.
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July 27, 2011 at 11:46 AM
I love this, Keith, with its sweet and most subtle approach! It has a classical feel, as if painted by a famous Renaissance or Victorian artist. A beautiful scene we can all admire and appreciate Keith!! Thanks SO MUCH for sharing this! Wishing you the best, love, Mikki
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