Alkas Poetry Poet Prose Poetry

Modern Way To Make a Pass At a Girl

Said a modern young man
to a possible intended to be a
serious dating girlfriend:


Oh babe...I feel from afar
your delicious fragrance of
braised onion in
mom's frying pan...
You have the perfume so
mind-blowing as cheese
grated by grandma ...
You taste finer than
 a the best selling
 sandwich of Mac Donald ...!
You're over appetizing than
a Steak and Chips,
than a pasta
with sauce ...
Your kiss tastes plus
soft than milk shake,
or a Neapolitan ice cream!
I desire you, as i
 spirit drink
with energetic, but i love you
mostly when you come hot
dressing "Cold Blond" ...
And she became ... enchanted
for a lovely date !!!

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Jeff Connelly July 28, 2019 at 8:23 AM Lovely laughable lines Alkas, but oh so true. Today's death of romance. A while back I wrote a poem about pick up lines. The only one I think I remember was, "I'll treat you like a princess my queen." Thanks Alkas. Jeff Connelly July 29, 2019 at 11:14 AM Jajaja I like that Alkas. I will have to watch out for that kind of woman jajaja. Alkas Poetry July 29, 2019 at 10:11 AM Clever line i'll treat you like a princess my queen, on the contrary if a woman says to a man i'll treat you like a prince my kING... no way to like it... ! Thank you my friend, salute alkas