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Modern Way To Make a Pass At a Girl

Said a modern young man to a possible intended to be a serious dating girlfriend: Oh babe...I feel from afar your delicious fragrance of braised onion in mom's frying pan... You have the perfume so mind-blowing as cheese grated by grandma ... You taste finer than a the best selling sandwich of Mac Donald ...! You're over appetizing than a Steak and Chips, than a pasta with sauce ... Your kiss tastes plus soft than milk shake, or a Neapolitan ice cream! I desire you, as i spirit drink with energetic, but i love you mostly when you come hot dressing "Cold Blond" ... And she became ... enchanted for a lovely date !!!

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Date: 7/28/2019 8:23:00 AM
Lovely laughable lines Alkas, but oh so true. Today's death of romance. A while back I wrote a poem about pick up lines. The only one I think I remember was, "I'll treat you like a princess my queen." Thanks Alkas.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/29/2019 11:14:00 AM
Jajaja I like that Alkas. I will have to watch out for that kind of woman jajaja.
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Alkas Poetry
Date: 7/29/2019 10:11:00 AM
Clever line i'll treat you like a princess my queen, on the contrary if a woman says to a man i'll treat you like a prince my kING... no way to like it... ! Thank you my friend, salute alkas

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