Modern Desserts

Dessert
Delicious, enjoyable
Dip, taste, um--um
Guilt, worry, forget
Chocolate

(Cinquain,modern)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
September 9, 2009 at 12:32 PM
at least chocolate has good points! ;) Light & Love
Cantu Avatar
September 7, 2009 at 6:27 PM
Oh jojjo hunger!!! I need some coockies, want some? Thanks for the experience=D
Fraser Avatar
September 6, 2009 at 8:30 AM
Sara, stop it - your making me hungry > lovely Cinquain>>James
Freeman Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 11:41 AM
Um--Um; wish I could, would help tremendously: forget chocolate! Lol, beautiful cinquain, Sincerely Moses
Weber Avatar
September 5, 2009 at 9:58 AM
This is a fun and engaging cinquain, Sara! I enjoy the playful nature of this. Warm regards, John.
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