Moderation Vii

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" GREAT PAINS " MY PHOTO, ©

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Lack of moderation in carnal pleasures condemns one to suffer great pains! © Demetrios Trifiatis 10 October 2022 - The above Monoku applies more to carnal pleasures. I see it from the ethical point of view. -

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/10/2022 7:59:00 PM

Yes Demetrios God says a lot of Carnal pleasure. You have shared another of his truths my friend. Thank you for doing so. Be blessed with good health...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/10/2022 12:15:00 PM

Moderation is certainly the key to everything in life. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2022 2:16:00 PM

So true, dearest friend, Tom. Our body and our mind cannot function properly if moderation is not present. Good to have you back. Blessings.

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/10/2022 7:00:00 AM

Dear friend, Demetrios. You obviously have a lot of life experience since you have such tremendous wisdom pouring through here. A state of equilibrium is necessary before the pain may be relieved.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2022 2:14:00 PM

You are so kind, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Thank you for your generous comment. Every excess is paid in full with pain. The equilibrium you are talking about is the alpha and omega of our being and it must be kept. Be blessed!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/10/2022 6:01:00 AM

So true--the pain follows. Beautiful rose.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 10/10/2022 2:04:00 PM

Thank you, dearest, Vijay! Yes, The pain follows. Blessings!