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Mockingbird's Love Song

ninety degrees hot
slight breeze sleepless humid night -
a bachelor sings 


5/20/2019


Poetry Contest: Full Writing Challenge 3, May 2019, Nature Haiku 
Sponsored by: Dear Heart


Although all adult male mockingbirds sing during the day,
 only a bachelor sings at night.
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Duncan Avatar
July 18, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Nice win :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 31, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Very creative, Eve. CONGRATS on your win! Janice
Callus Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your top-placed win, Eve! At least your bachelor sings and not wolf whistles:) Hugs // paul
May Avatar
May 28, 2019 at 6:47 AM
Congrats on your win Eve..Nicely done..
La France Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Eve congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful haiku and I love the image too!
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 2:53 PM
such a CUTE last line. BIG congrats on your awesome win, Eve.
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 1:28 PM
- I learned something new from this, Eve ... lovely haiku :) - Congratulations on 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gilmour Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 12:54 PM
Fabulous Haiku Eve and learnt something new, also, so many thanks and congrats to you on your top win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Murray Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 4:58 PM
That bachelor might be too hot to handle Eve. Love it. Best of luck for the contest.
Horsman Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Wonderful Haiku Eve, informative also, love this..
Michael Avatar
May 25, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Many bachelors sing...Nice write...
Onclaud Avatar
May 24, 2019 at 11:33 AM
beautiful 'ku, eve... i learned something knew about a bachelor... huggs
Proxenos Avatar
May 23, 2019 at 1:58 AM
What an interesting and informative write and about a mocking bird which we don't have in S. Africa but about whom I have read a lot about - however this I didn't know! Hugs, Jennifer.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Gorgeous!!! A winner for me :) xomo!
Allison Avatar
May 21, 2019 at 12:08 AM
oh how informative Eve;-) hugs jan xx
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