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Mocking Bird Chatters

Gray thickness coats all Cool dampness penetrates morn Mocking Bird chatters Soon sun will chase away fog Cotton clouds float gingerly

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Harry Horsman

Date: 10/11/2012 9:59:00 AM

i love this Sara, you have done it again, entices me into your world, and believe me i enjoy every minute of it.....

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/10/2012 3:02:00 PM

What a beautiful scene you have implanted into my mind! I really enjoyed this elegant piece my friend! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/10/2012 3:01:00 PM

ELEGANT CANVAS OF BEAUTY SARA .. FEELING THE PRESENCE OF EACH LINE LUV .. WINNER HERE ..

Debra Squyres

Date: 10/10/2012 12:10:00 PM

I see it, I hear it...wonderful write !!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/10/2012 9:46:00 AM

descriptive read with such flowing feel, sara.. the mockingbird line ties it all up.. love this.. winning huggs!..;)

Jack Horne

Date: 10/10/2012 9:29:00 AM

love the picture I see here, my friend. I've heard of mocking birds, but we don't get them over here. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Annie Lander

Date: 10/10/2012 7:46:00 AM

oh how i long for the summer I feel like fall is here .. cotton clouds float gingerly love your choice of words