Mocking Bird Chatters

Gray thickness coats all Cool dampness penetrates morn Mocking Bird chatters Soon sun will chase away fog Cotton clouds float gingerly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 9:59 AM
i love this Sara, you have done it again, entices me into your world, and believe me i enjoy every minute of it.....
Sivey Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:02 PM
What a beautiful scene you have implanted into my mind! I really enjoyed this elegant piece my friend! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 3:01 PM
ELEGANT CANVAS OF BEAUTY SARA .. FEELING THE PRESENCE OF EACH LINE LUV .. WINNER HERE ..
Squyres Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 12:10 PM
I see it, I hear it...wonderful write !!!
Onclaud Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 9:46 AM
descriptive read with such flowing feel, sara.. the mockingbird line ties it all up.. love this.. winning huggs!..;)
Horne Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 9:29 AM
love the picture I see here, my friend. I've heard of mocking birds, but we don't get them over here. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )
Lander Avatar
October 10, 2012 at 7:46 AM
oh how i long for the summer I feel like fall is here .. cotton clouds float gingerly love your choice of words
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