Paul Beadnall Poet Free verse

Mobious Syndrome

Such an overwhelming,heartwrenching disease
 from a baby,a parents pain,sheilded yet knotted inside
   non facial expressions,no tears,no laughter
       how do you detect the mood of your infant.

           Discovered from a cist on the brain
             a young mum, to finalize her vital exams
               grandma`s love, family and friends too 
                help  make this possible.

                      A non existant forward, it may seem
                        weeks of contiuous tests,hearts full of hope
                           proven that it can be overstepped
                             grown teenager speaks of his ordeal

                                 Today is the day,that consultant is seen,apprehensive,nrevous
                                  tears of joy,negative test, a normal life,others not so lucky
 
Paul Beadnall for Brian Strand`s ( free verse contest)                                    19/7/2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 19, 2011 at 7:24 AM Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Paul. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol

Jack Ross Jr. July 18, 2011 at 3:41 PM Great poem, emotional, touching. Thanks for your gracious kind words on my poem Help me Understand......You are a kind Gent, can't express how much I appreciate the encouragement and you thoughfulness......thanks friend......Old Jack