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Mm Mmm M M Mm Mmm

Mm mmm m m mm mmm. Campbell’s don’t have nothing on you. If you asked for anything it’d be done in a sec. For you there’s nothing I wouldn’t do nor regret. If you told me to come over to keep you company. I’d wait all night like people at a Star Wars movie. My thoughts are having collisions; my mind’s in a haze. When I think about you I get lost for days. I would give up anything just to be with you. Girl you don’t know you’re mm mmm m m mm mmm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/22/2009 7:54:00 AM
Thanks for your invitation to read your poems I've read your poem because of the title wowwowwowwww :)
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Date: 1/17/2009 12:32:00 PM
Good poem Raul it is really good!.................Danielle
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Date: 1/14/2009 5:10:00 PM
I like this poem, its sweet and catering! [smile], It puts you in place that you would never want to leave. Nice job!
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Date: 1/3/2009 4:21:00 PM
Raul, I. like Elizabeth Neal, Read this POEM because of the Title Mmm Mm Mm Mmmm I knew of such a Women many Years ago Great Write YOUR POETRY Friend...HG Raul, If YOU have not READ Barbara Gorelick's POEM " FOREVER " Please DO It would be an Honor for us to get a Dedication From YOU A little history : LENORE ELLEN Adams JOHNSON Drowned in the Carribean Sea, seven hours and Fourteen minutes after becoming my Wife August 25,1971 Thanks again LOVE YOUr Pen ...HG
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Date: 12/28/2008 2:10:00 AM
That's a very very good poem, it takes me back to my Casanova days. It sounds like young love. ~Caramel
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Date: 12/24/2008 8:19:00 AM
Wow, that was an awesome poem. I love the way you write. Can't wait to read your other poems! ~Al
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Date: 12/23/2008 8:56:00 PM
Raul, this is mmm mmm wonderful! I love it! It gives you an "uplifting" feeling. As always, God bless you and Merry Christmas!!! Love Robin
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Date: 12/23/2008 4:37:00 PM
This is a lovely piece, the title caught my attention quickly. You always seem to amaze me. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 12/23/2008 10:35:00 AM
nice piece and a good ideal; for youngsters. john lol
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Date: 12/22/2008 2:29:00 PM
Aw, this is too sweet! She is a lucky girl, that's for sure! Such a delight to read. Good luck! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/21/2008 8:01:00 PM
This is wonderful Raul. mm mmm m m m mm mmm romantic side. GBU my brother. Michael
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Date: 12/21/2008 7:17:00 PM
Wow, nice work, the title is a grabber. DN
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Date: 12/21/2008 6:26:00 PM
The title caught my attention. I got a chuckle as you used this soup lingo in a creative way most will relate to. Enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
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Date: 12/21/2008 4:29:00 PM
Raul - Sounds like love - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 4:22:00 PM
Sometimes I hate coming back from those memories too Raul.
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Date: 12/21/2008 4:09:00 PM
Lol..that is some girlfriend if campbell has nothing on her..lol..I love how you sold me on this woman..well done.
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