Mm Mmm M M Mm Mmm

Mm mmm m m mm mmm.
Campbell’s don’t have nothing on you.

If you asked for anything it’d be done in a sec.
For you there’s nothing I wouldn’t do nor regret.

If you told me to come over to keep you company.
I’d wait all night like people at a Star Wars movie.

My thoughts are having collisions; my mind’s in a haze.
When I think about you I get lost for days.

I would give up anything just to be with you.
Girl you don’t know you’re mm mmm m m mm mmm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Erken Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 7:54 AM
Thanks for your invitation to read your poems I've read your poem because of the title wowwowwowwww :)
Moreno Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 12:32 PM
Good poem Raul it is really good!.................Danielle
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January 14, 2009 at 5:10 PM
I like this poem, its sweet and catering! [smile], It puts you in place that you would never want to leave. Nice job!
Esquire Avatar
January 3, 2009 at 4:21 PM
Raul, I. like Elizabeth Neal, Read this POEM because of the Title Mmm Mm Mm Mmmm I knew of such a Women many Years ago Great Write YOUR POETRY Friend...HG Raul, If YOU have not READ Barbara Gorelick's POEM " FOREVER " Please DO It would be an Honor for us to get a Dedication From YOU A little history : LENORE ELLEN Adams JOHNSON Drowned in the Carribean Sea, seven hours and Fourteen minutes after becoming my Wife August 25,1971 Thanks again LOVE YOUr Pen ...HG
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December 28, 2008 at 2:10 AM
That's a very very good poem, it takes me back to my Casanova days. It sounds like young love. ~Caramel
B. Avatar
December 24, 2008 at 8:19 AM
Wow, that was an awesome poem. I love the way you write. Can't wait to read your other poems! ~Al
Gass Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 8:56 PM
Raul, this is mmm mmm wonderful! I love it! It gives you an "uplifting" feeling. As always, God bless you and Merry Christmas!!! Love Robin
Neal Avatar
December 23, 2008 at 4:37 PM
This is a lovely piece, the title caught my attention quickly. You always seem to amaze me. Love Elizabeth
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December 23, 2008 at 10:35 AM
nice piece and a good ideal; for youngsters. john lol
Winter Avatar
December 22, 2008 at 2:29 PM
Aw, this is too sweet! She is a lucky girl, that's for sure! Such a delight to read. Good luck! Love, Shar
Torres Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 8:01 PM
This is wonderful Raul. mm mmm m m m mm mmm romantic side. GBU my brother. Michael
Neal Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 7:17 PM
Wow, nice work, the title is a grabber. DN
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December 21, 2008 at 6:26 PM
The title caught my attention. I got a chuckle as you used this soup lingo in a creative way most will relate to. Enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Karen
Jordan Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 4:29 PM
Raul - Sounds like love - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
Higgins Avatar
December 21, 2008 at 4:22 PM
Sometimes I hate coming back from those memories too Raul.
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December 21, 2008 at 4:09 PM
Lol..that is some girlfriend if campbell has nothing on her..lol..I love how you sold me on this woman..well done.
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