Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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The running bramble so wild and free
Could not set down roots you see
Cannon Lily a stable sort
Clung to her place in the port

Running bramble reached down to touch
Cannon Lily blossoms reached up high
Desire for love and sweet kisses
A new species on earth would survive

Cannon Lily wanted to stay put
Running bramble was on the go
Never one to be contained for long
Lily's heart was torn apart so 

Lily decided to follow him afar
Torn between kin and stable life
Bramble traveled across the plain
Following the sound of the fife 

Off springs some like mother Lily
Some like their non-contained dad
Planted across the country
Lily's heart broken from loss so sad

Just for fun!!! Something wild..
A sort of rhyme..LOL

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Ravi Sathasivam May 23, 2016 at 4:23 AM Excellent. A perfect write with your great imagery. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Sara Kendrick May 23, 2016 at 5:04 PM So encouraged that you chose to read my work..Sara

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2016 at 4:00 PM it was fun, Sara. Getting in tune with mother nature's wild ways. Sara Kendrick May 23, 2016 at 5:03 PM She has some wild ones..Thanks ..Sara

Jerry T Curtis May 22, 2016 at 6:28 AM "A perfection in imagery" Sara Kendrick May 23, 2016 at 5:02 PM Your compliments are uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen May 22, 2016 at 6:15 AM - Beautiful and unique, enjoy the way you write this dear Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Sara Kendrick May 22, 2016 at 7:24 AM Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence is uplifting..Sara

Judy Ball May 21, 2016 at 4:47 PM WoW! I guess you could read a lot into this. To me it sounds like two young lovers torn apart by different callings. She is a home body who wants to put down roots and he is a vagabond who wants to see what's behind the next hill. In the end he is gone and she is heart broken. Beautiful write. God Bless and a seven from me. JB Sara Kendrick May 21, 2016 at 4:52 PM Yes, one can go anyway that they want with this one..Many young ladies or men are hurt by mating up with someone so very different and unwilling to change..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Harry Horsman May 21, 2016 at 3:43 PM Your poetry fun still holds a special message Sara, love this. Sara Kendrick May 21, 2016 at 4:17 PM Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Nette Onclaud May 21, 2016 at 2:35 PM nature always becomes you, sara.. so beautiful!.. huggs Sara Kendrick May 21, 2016 at 3:05 PM Thanks for the visit..Your comments are so encouraging..Sara