Misuse of Gun

dead bodies on 
ground...
he goes for a 
shooting spree
to appease himself



CONTEST:"A 'Gun'-o-
Ku" sponsored by 
Gwendolen Rix
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:38 PM
sad but true one. Congrats on your win, my friend.
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:37 AM
Olusegun Congrats on your win!Very nice haiku.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:29 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Olusegun xx
Johnson Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 11:49 PM
Hair trigger tempers and hair triggers. Bad combination. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Mannan Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 11:06 PM
Many congrats olusegun for this well deserved win
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February 25, 2013 at 9:05 PM
Olusegun, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
Song Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 8:55 PM
Olusegun...u got right into the head of a madman in your haiku...please read my lil blog regarding the contest results. Liked your juxto at the beginning....nice effect! Best to u always, gwendolen
Dietrich Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 5:19 PM
Did you mean shooting spree? that is how it seems to me. yes, a very good example of misuse!!
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