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Misunderstood

Yeah we met and it started out great We didn’t need words – we were in sync But then something went wrong and it all came apart That synchronisation started to fade I thought it would be love at first sight But I got it all wrong and then started a fight - That I never knew how to end Was I missing something or did I just misunderstand? Cause every time I turned left, you would go right I would reach out and you retracted your hand In reality it all lasted about a second But to my heart it was like a lifetime of heartache, confusion and disappointment And worse of all – you never even cared Or maybe you did? I don’t know Never seemed like it…

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Martins Deep

Date: 3/23/2018 8:50:00 AM

Love hoe you dish sweet simple imageries. Its beautiful.

Renee Maritz
Date: 4/3/2018 12:10:00 PM

thanks so much :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 2/22/2018 10:17:00 AM

It s another great written poem by you, I guess that it s the continuation of your poem lie to me, or is it on the same person, anyway, it s a really nice one, no relation stand when misunderstandings and soubts startes to crept in it, after then things only get worse, the best thing is to sit and discuss everything before it s too late, welcome to poetrysoup, I m sure that you ll love your stay here, good luck and continue to write

Renee Maritz
Date: 2/23/2018 7:35:00 AM

Thanks :) yes it was actually written about 2 different people but same scenario of being lead on to believe in them and then being hurt badly through their actions of losing interest and not caring. I am hoping to learn a lot from the people on this site like you, input and comments always appreciated

Silent One

Date: 2/22/2018 6:23:00 AM

We are all misunderstood in some way, well written Renee...

Renee Maritz
Date: 2/23/2018 7:36:00 AM

Yes thanks, this is why I believe in letting others know how you feel and how important it is to express yourself so that people might try and understand you :)