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Contest: Some Kind of Misty

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Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

Date: 08-07-2025

 

 

Out of the blue, noticed
The haunt of soulful eyes
Aging eyes with wrinkles
But the same vibe and charm
Sunken eyes grew misty
For sensing same ardour

Place: 3rd

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Date: 7/11/2025 12:10:00 PM
Way to go. Congrats on your win
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/24/2025 5:37:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments
Date: 7/11/2025 7:00:00 AM
The eyes can say much…those same eyes! Congrats!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 7/24/2025 5:36:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Date: 7/11/2025 5:32:00 AM
These eyes have seen it all, every aspect of life. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/24/2025 5:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.

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