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Contest: Some Kind of Misty

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Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

Date: 08-07-2025

 

 

Misty Sunken Eyes

Out of the blue, noticed
The haunt of soulful eyes
Aging eyes with wrinkles
But the same vibe and charm
Sunken eyes grew misty
For sensing same ardour

Place: 3rd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 12:10 PM
Way to go. Congrats on your win
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:37 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 7:00 AM
The eyes can say much…those same eyes! Congrats!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:36 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
Sharma Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 5:32 AM
These eyes have seen it all, every aspect of life. Congratulations on your win.
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 5:38 PM
Thank you so much for the compliments.
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