Misty River Rainbows

the river disappeared
into a misty maze
as rainbow gardens grew
and bowed their pretty heads
like flowers in the rain...

written July 6, 2025 for Nette Onclaud's
Some Kind of Misty contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 11:49 AM
Gorgeous nugget. Congrats
Empress Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 10:51 AM
Love " like flowers in the rain " how evocative gentle and beautiful to the eyes and soul. Your words always are soulfully moving! Pleasure reading dear craigsz. Sending you light always
Narain Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 10:17 AM
Beautiful poem with perfect imagery.
Miller Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 7:18 AM
This is wonderful Craig, congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 6:53 AM
Congrats on 1st place, Craig!
Dutta Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 6:27 AM
Big Congrats to win Top. Have Good Days
Swan Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 5:14 AM
Lovely! You have created a picture of when sky and water merge. J :)
Sharma Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 4:59 AM
Many congratulations for winning the contest. Colourful words like the rainbow.....
Evangeline Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 3:21 AM
Lovely picture you painted there with so few words, Craig. Congrats on the win!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 10:10 AM
How beautiful, Craig!
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