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Misty Morning

It’s a dreamy misty Sunday morning
With the sun ever so lazily rising
Zen the heron fishing yond
Stands tall and patient in the pond

This is cottage living at its best
Sitting on the deck feeling blessed
Breathing in the woodsy air
From my favourite Adirondack chair
Serene, never feeling so free
In awe at the sleeping lake before me

I think of folks and things bygone
I feel a glowing surge of bliss
Let me put the kettle on
so you and I can reminisce



(Yes, I named my heron Zen)

AP: 1st place 2022, Front Page Pick 2022

Submitted on February 9, 2018 for contest KETTLE, POND, LAKE sponsored by NAYDA IVETTE NEGRON  -  RANKED 2ND
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Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 4:57 AM
Congratulations, Line on your win.
Gauthier Avatar
May 20, 2018 at 7:28 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Gentry Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 4:42 AM
Congratulations on your win! I'll have some of that...
Gauthier Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Of course. Thank you very much, Susan.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 18, 2018 at 1:55 AM
Congratulations, Line on your well deserved win. Beautifully penned.
Gauthier Avatar
May 19, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Thanks you very much, Subimal.
Dietrich Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:37 PM
wow you did yours so dreamy. I love the easy flow and how the three words fit in so well. I really hope to do this one. Tonight if I can fit it in!! Love this.
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Thanks, Andrea. I look forward to reading your interpretation of the challenge.
Rv Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Lovely picture, what a nice feeling.. all the best in the contest!
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 11:00 PM
Thank you, Sneha. Much appreciated.
Canerdy Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 1:55 PM
Ahh, peace so beautifully described, Line! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Welcome and thanks for your visit, Janice. Most appreciated.
Sietesantos Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 8:51 AM
My friend, this is a winner in my books! I love the amazing picture you so cleverly painted around 3 challenging words. I can imagine sitting on the deck, communing with nature, and enjoying a nice cup of tea! Well done! Hugs. Pandita
Gauthier Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:08 AM
Thank you so much, Pandita. Most appreciated visit and comment.
Parker Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 11:44 AM
nicely done what a calm and righteous setting to just relax...good luck
Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Thank you, Frederic. Most appreciated.
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