Misty Moon

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07/23/23

Choose a line II

Third Place

Contest by Joseph May

Misty Moon

                            "AS THE MISTY MOON RIDES HIGH"
                            on dark night in starry sky.
                             Muse of heart rippling in rue.
                             Flashed ! When bade you adieu.

                            Lingering urge, tingling passion,
                            Drowning, sinking sensation !
                            Lost love in fervent fervour.
                            Past dreamy desires quiver.

                             Torn pieces of cloud flying by
                             trying to hide Moon looking shy.
                             Me sleepless on bed to lie.
                             Bygone days repent to sigh.

                             Melancholy in Moon beam.
                             Moon marooned in gloomy gleam.
                             Morose pale seen through window.
                             Mystique moon ! Shape : Crescendo.
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Joseph May

Date: 8/13/2023 11:27:00 AM

Congrats on your win Anisha, Very nicely penned