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Misty Moment of Lost Love

     "Misty Moment of Lost Love"




flame fades

vintage dreams dwell

buried embers

pierced pieces stain soiled earth

misty moment of lost love

veils smoked ash.
                 ~~~
spurned heart

immersed in glow

splintered veins cry

wooden tomb smothers breath

misty moment of lost love

death's cavern.
                  ~~~


*For Black-Eyed Susan's Any Poem under 20 lines Contest.
*Oct. 27, 2012. 

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Skat A Date: 3/13/2014 3:13:00 AM deep poem... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 11/15/2012 2:31:00 PM so cold sweetie and very sad! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/15/2012 7:41:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's "Poem Not Entered in a contest" Linda-Marie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/13/2012 4:37:00 PM Congratulations, LInda on your win with this one. I remember it! Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 11/13/2012 8:17:00 AM Many congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Linda-M! love/hugs, LG Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/13/2012 12:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win Linda, well done xx Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/12/2012 4:44:00 PM Linda my bff, congratulations in Susan's contest... xox~pd Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/12/2012 4:30:00 PM congrats on your win with this poignant write Linda Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/12/2012 12:20:00 PM WON 4TH PLACE .. THANKXX Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 11/12/2012 12:13:00 PM Wow Linda Marie...beautiful and intense!...congrats on the win...The Saints look like they're coming around and the Giants seem to be in their usual mid-season slump...not to worry... they do this every year they win the Super Bowl - Tim Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/12/2012 8:13:00 AM Love it Linda!Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/11/2012 5:04:00 PM this was very good, Linda, glad to see you on the winners list . Congrats!! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/11/2012 10:56:00 AM Hello Linda my bff...., CONGRATULATIONS, in Nette's "VIEWS FROM A VIGNETTE" contest.. Keep up the good work... always~ PD Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/9/2012 7:40:00 PM WON 5TH PLACE ..THANKXXX. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/9/2012 5:41:00 PM Very expressive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Congrats on your great win...Sara Login to Reply

Tanya Harrington Date: 11/9/2012 12:45:00 PM Congrats on your win with this strong, vivid creation. Beautiful write of such sorrow. :) Tanya Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 11/9/2012 10:19:00 AM Another beautiful verse from you Linda.Congrats on the win. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/9/2012 8:05:00 AM Another superb win, congratulations Linda xx Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/9/2012 7:23:00 AM Congratulations on your win in the Vignette contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol No snow here ...it is warming here. Hope you all have relief soon. Our prayers are with you. Login to Reply

Cynthia Alvez Date: 11/2/2012 1:45:00 PM Ah, lovely!...Deep! Cynthia Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 10/31/2012 8:44:00 AM An outstanding write on this wonderful poem . Hope all is fine and that you weathered the storm okay. It looked terrible. love phyl Login to Reply

Ronny Madonsela Date: 10/30/2012 6:42:00 AM VERY POWERFUL POEM, YET WRITTEN WITH SUCH GRACE. I WAS WOWED I LOVE THIS. *SMILES* RON Login to Reply

Rachel St.Cross Date: 10/29/2012 3:43:00 AM ‡ You Know You Know When You Truly Love A Poet, Sweet Precious Beautiful Linda Marie, When Their Words Float Slowly Afore Your Eyes. When You Feel Them, 'Deep Inside.' The Senses Reaching Feeling Absorbing, Touching,, Loving. Tis When One Knows They Have Beheld, The Rarest In Beautiful Treasures. All Of The Above, And Sooo Much More, Apply Unto Your Beautiful Self. The Sight Of You, Your Voice, Your Heart, Everything, Is A Beacons Lighthouse Beckoning. Raging Waters, Inside. My Love, Rachel * Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/28/2012 11:13:00 PM passing through ans saw this , sweets!.. thanks; we need 2 stanzas... go and add!..:) huggs and love Login to Reply Nette Onclaud Date: 10/28/2012 11:15:00 PM congrats on your recent wins... yes!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 10/28/2012 8:05:00 PM A rocking entry for the contest, luv!! Jag Login to Reply

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