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Entry for Some Kind of Misty Poetry Contest: Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Date wrote 06/07/25         

 

Misty is Time

Now and then, the misty
depths of her failing mind
clear for a brief moment;
and then she can recall
the beauty that she was;
and to me, remains so.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 11:52 AM
Ahhh this is truly wonderful. Congrats on a first placement
Miller Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 9:16 AM
Thank you Andrea
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 6:56 AM
Congrats! Very nice!
Miller Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Kim
Swan Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 5:16 AM
There is a sweet love in the middle of memory loss - such a rare treasure. J
Miller Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 7:21 AM
Thank you Jeanette
Wolf Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 5:03 PM
The brief respite from a beauty's decline is so stirring, Terry. Nicely done. ~ Gershon
Miller Avatar
July 9, 2025 at 4:52 AM
Thank you Gershon
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 9:02 AM
I enjoyed reading your "Misty is Time" write. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................
Miller Avatar
July 9, 2025 at 4:52 AM
Thank you Paula
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