Misty Day

Misty Day 

Glancing out of the window I see the potted plant 
on the sill and the house on the other side of
the road… the light is fading and the plant looks as
sad as a whitewashed wall in rain… its whiteness 
was an illusion caused by the sun. 

Mist of grief encircles olive trees there are blank 
tears on my almond tree´s spindly twigs, yet inside
each droplet I see a tiny world reflecting my own,
only with greater incorruptibility of the untested. 
And far away, as a whisper, a mother sings a lullaby.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 12:28 PM
Wonderful reading your excellent poetry today Jan. Love, Carol
Hansen Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 1:45 PM
thank you Carol
Collins Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 6:46 AM
Dear Jan, this one worries me. My friend, a droplet now on the edge of an olive tree. No more scooter days. Give us a wink in your next one, so I know the child is there. love, Kathy
Hansen Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 7:08 AM
do not worry dear kathy
Palmer Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:32 AM
lovely write Jan
Culverhouse Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 5:25 AM
sadly written and with great skill
Hansen Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 7:09 AM
thank you doris
Loving Iii Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 3:22 AM
Fasinating
Hansen Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 4:43 AM
thank you john
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