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Misty clouded heart

Misty clouds fill my eyes, After you stabbed my heart, With a blade forged in hate. Pain oozes out like blood, But neither red nor caked – Yet it outlives all thought. Contest Name: Some Kind Of Misty Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud Date: July 5th, 2025.

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Date: 7/11/2025 12:16:00 PM
Very emotive one. Congrats on the win
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 7/12/2025 10:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 7/11/2025 7:05:00 AM
Congrats, Maclawrence! I perceive this may not be a real blade but a metaphor.
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Maclawrence Famuyiwa
Date: 7/11/2025 11:43:00 AM
Surely Kim. Thanks for your comment.

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