Misty clouded heart

Misty clouds fill my eyes,
After you stabbed my heart,
With a blade forged in hate.
Pain oozes out like blood,
But neither red nor caked –
Yet it outlives all thought.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Very emotive one. Congrats on the win
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 12, 2025 at 10:09 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 7:05 AM
Congrats, Maclawrence! I perceive this may not be a real blade but a metaphor.
Famuyiwa Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 11:43 AM
Surely Kim. Thanks for your comment.
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