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Misty Autumn Evening

misty autumn evening our lips collide  under blushing stars and rustling leaves on sassafras trees my skin you touch cooing dove sounds exit my lips caramel eyes on fire my hand glides on silk and warm cotton perfume inhaled  fingers sweet  that ole south huckleberry wind comes cool off the river wind plays tag with running brown leaves inside the castle walls shadows tango with sunlight vibrations race throughout my body shuddering  like a leaf a meteor shower  of onyx and cafe noir  the scent of clary sage  and alabaster      is the perfume I wear feeding frenzy breath sounds  skin muscle bone and sinew      liquid caramel brown eyes glistening rosy pink lips eyes dilate as the levee breaks

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Date: 11/2/2019 7:41:00 PM
wow, very very romantic and sensuous. Sizzling with imagery, Brenda.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/2/2019 8:20:00 PM
Andrea thank you so much for the read! And the lovely comment! ;)
Date: 11/1/2019 10:20:00 AM
Gosh, Brenda...looks like you have thrown everything at this one -- including the proverbial kitchen sink! A wonderful kaleidoscope of rich and vibrant colours all deliciously combining...what a truly mouth-watering feast you present us with here. Love this! In much affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 12:47:00 PM
Lol yea oh I thought I had thrown the kitchen sink in there my bad! Hahaha! Thank you so much! Warmest affection!;)
Date: 11/1/2019 4:48:00 AM
Wonderful write... So romantic and beautiful scenery. Love it. Blessings, Gina
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/1/2019 5:30:00 AM
Regina you are too kind thank so very much!;)
Date: 10/31/2019 10:00:00 PM
I really and truly love the tone this poem is written in. You couldn’t have painted the atmosphere any better. Love your work Brenda!!!! INK
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/31/2019 10:08:00 PM
Ahhh Ink you are too kind but thank you so much! I just got through writing it after emailing a new friend of mine and well he seemed to spark my muse and wha la this is the end product!;)