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Mistrust From a Friend and Lover

It has been a big illusion And a mind game of delusion Ever since you came through My life tearing it in two With all the lies and deception I thought we had a connection That was strong and wouldn't break I never knew you'd be fake Leading me in a direction That could use some interception And reversal from the past I just want a way to blast Myself back to when we met So I can not have regret Allowing you to be a part Of my lonely life and heart But now I see I was stupid I am going to find cupid His arrow I will shoot him with Destroying every bit of myth That he's bringing hearts together In my life there has been never On guy cupid found for me Who stopped my paths of misery They walked on me like a doormat And each time I just fell flat With foot marks that leave a scar But now it's gone way too far When your cheating ways led to Me walking right in on you With my best friend who I have known For years, but now she has shown How unloyal she has been Both of you have caused the end Of my care in anyone My trusting days are finally done

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/13/2014 10:38:00 PM
Another nice write. I have a suggestion for your 19th and 20th lines: You ended your 19th line with a preposition which is a grammatical error. How about converting those two lines to "I will shoot him with his own arrow", and "every bit of myth about him will go." It's your write. It's just a helpful suggestion for your approval.
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Date: 3/4/2014 9:02:00 AM
Wew, this hurts. I hope it is not a current experience but rather a poetic expression. Either way it is very effectively expressed.
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Date: 3/4/2014 3:56:00 AM
Great outpouring! the sun will shine again, good of you to share. Tiaua.
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Date: 3/4/2014 12:51:00 AM
Another great one,watchout in your next love.
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Date: 3/3/2014 9:49:00 PM
Belated happy birthday Robin and I enjoyed reading this poem:),,, Verlena
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