Mistress

Master of my own fate and desires Issues commands and orders for his good Serene in my new found desires Trusts only one explicitly Respects all who choose this path Expects to be obeyed no matter what Sees a whole new world before me Sets my sights on this lovely new life

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/20/2009 7:15:00 AM

Kristy, It is nice to see that your new life is lovely. And your writing is lovely as well. Sincerely, DAS-J

James Fraser

Date: 7/12/2009 6:45:00 AM

Fair comment by Judy, but sometimes words have to be seen, and not stand out like neon signs, lovely Acrostic Kristy>>James

Raul Moreno

Date: 7/11/2009 9:35:00 PM

Nice acrostic Kristy...Raul

Judy Riley

Date: 7/11/2009 8:41:00 PM

This fits the meaning of the title, I do not know about a mistress respecting too much, but it is a good try. The Acrostic would stand out better if you leave a space between the first letter of each line. M - aster I - ssues, etc, just a sugestion. thanks for sharing , Judy Riley