Mistreated By the One I Love

She was the love of my life
But was never much of a wife
Which caused a whole lot of strife
Her hatred cut through my heart like a surgical knife
Once full of life now praying for a change in life
The love faded as the hate invaded
My thoughts persuaded while my presence was degraded
Always making me feel like you downgraded
All along my soul forever shaded

Wishing I knew the reason I was hated Or why the feelings were abated Dreaming of the day that I will be extricated We were definitely mismated What a fool as I stand here life deflated Can only hope it will be mended Its always myself I'm defending Time to stop pretending No more room for bending The unrelenting ending is impending
3/29/2017

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Date: 3/29/2017 6:30:00 AM
Congrats Jeremy, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Date: 3/21/2017 11:14:00 AM
Hello Jeremy this is a tragic write. So sad. Drop it, leave it, let it go! My dead husband cheated on me. That was a big hurt. So I am healing now. I live by these words. I feel your pain.A 7.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/27/2017 1:10:00 PM
I just want you to know that there are good women out there.
Date: 3/20/2017 3:14:00 AM
Such a tragic write. Blessings to you and sending you strength. #7
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Date: 3/19/2017 3:58:00 PM
Such a sad reality..when there is a bully in the house..who can make the other half believe.that they are the better ones..and He is always the loser...Sad reality..A reality..one should escape.though its easier said than done..especially if kids are involved.This poem..gives me a pain in the heart..Can feel it deep.
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