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Mistral of Falling Thoughts

i riffle in thoughts
on the threshold
of  this day

orchid folds
blush against
crimson shades
as memories emerge
in semblance of you

i can almost hear
your breath rise
then fall
amidst trees
like a mistral
of autumn's air
i shiver
in its touch
as i blush
within the rise
of thoughts
more flushed
then the horizon

day breaks
less satiated
then i
once again

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/10/2019 3:35:00 AM

I love the first line so much! I keep running back up to re-read it. Great job!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/10/2019 5:34:00 AM

Thank you Caren :) hugs

Ann Foster

Date: 9/7/2019 1:04:00 PM

This was a calm, lovely read. I enjoyed it. So I read it twice. Ann

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/10/2019 5:34:00 AM

Thank you so much Ann :) have a wonderful day! Hugs

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/6/2019 6:48:00 PM

Moving verse here! What does "mistral" mean? Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/6/2019 6:57:00 PM

Mistral means cold wind ... thank you for your kind words and visit :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/6/2019 7:41:00 AM

It is the magic of your words that captures the reader, Sandy. Who can stop reading after such a start: i riffle in thoughts on the threshold of this day. Amazing poetry delivered in precious few words.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/6/2019 5:12:00 PM

thank you so much Vijay, your comment made me smile... hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 9/6/2019 7:12:00 AM

A cold wind flowing against a backdrop of color and thoughts, both beautifully illuminating as they await the arrival of this new day where old memories still linger. This was very soulful feeling to me, alone with our thoughts and nature. Beautifully expressed.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/6/2019 5:11:00 PM

sounds like today's weather here....cool breeze, longing for a sun through the drizzle...dorian's outer bands are touching us, but your words are far more touching my friend :) hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/5/2019 10:45:00 PM

Your free flow of thoughts and lovely imagery are beautiful, for sure, Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/6/2019 5:08:00 PM

awww Thank you Caren...sometimes my muse sings, if only she could learn meter and rhyme :) hugs

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/5/2019 10:00:00 PM

Well written in a very visual way! I could picture it as I read! Nicely done!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/6/2019 5:07:00 PM

Thank you Brenda...i appreciate all your kind comments :) hugs