Mistitation

the droplets pitter-pattered
as my footprints melted into doesn't-matters
and all the buzzings and birds skitter-scattered
and, with Beauty on the nigh...all thought shattered
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 28, 2018 at 3:27 AM
This is a gorgeous monorhyme. It is ever so interesting in poetry when the poet takes a chance and makes word sense out of things others might not realize are words. This has a dynamic pattern that intrigues me. I love it!
Watson Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 10:52 AM
I am so so very grateful for your time spent with the words here, the energies here. As well, your time shared with me to compose your kind words. I am very appreciative. Thank YOU! :)
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