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Mister Sol

The sky has suddenly turned from grey to bright blue Buoying the spirits of both this guy and youse It's how it works Behind clouds it lurks Like an old friend, Mr. Sol shines through

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/19/2017 1:50:00 PM

You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/19/2017 4:59:00 PM

You are such an amazing friend, my dear Funom! Thank you for each and every one of your eloquent comments!!! Your lines are so well written, my good friend!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 7/18/2017 4:40:00 PM

I s'pose old Sol deserves a day off//I might whine, but he'll just scoff//a blue sky high//is usually why//I'm riding my gherkins aloft. BUOY ON JACKIE BOY!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/19/2017 6:49:00 AM

A DAY OFF!!!! He's had very few DAYS ON!!! YOU'RE RIDING YOUR GHERKIN???? BUOY ON BUOY!!!