Mister Killjoy

A brand-new fur coat
   The latest smart phone
Four cruises a year
   An ocean-front home

She must have it all
   Says money's no object
Yet at times he objects
   To her kind of logic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Mcguire Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 7:00 PM
True many times, great poem , read my poem " I Don't Need God" if you can
Mcguire Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 9:21 PM
5/24/18
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 7:46 PM
Thanks, Timothy! Can you give me an approximate date when you posted 'I don't need God?' That 'll help me find it. Thanks! :) gw
Babbit Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 9:18 AM
What we do for love. Nice flow.
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 1:25 PM
Without love, I guess we'd be pretty lazy, self-centered folks, eh?! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:57 AM
Four cruises a year! I know her! She is my best friend and her name is Susan and she is single so I am trying to picture who the "he" is.
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 1:11 PM
It's Susan's invisible friend, of course!! (What happened to those faeries you write about? Aren't they invisible to 'commoners' as well? LOL). Thank you, Caren. Cheers, Gershon
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 4:50 AM
Ah, the wise musing of a man given the key to his ball-and-chain buy (pun intended) his better half. Lol! A very witty poem, Shon! And the ink acid drip burns w/truth from atoned pure lips. (As we forgive each other our faults.) Ty for sharing this delightful muse. Love and peace always.
Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 1:11 PM
Freddie, that ball and chain is every woman's dowry, eh?!… Thanks, Gershon :)
Adams Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 3:49 PM
well if it's affordable, i say live it up, we only get one go around in this world...i'd rather die happy then die wishing i had lived... good penning...:) hugs
Adams Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 5:16 PM
but of course....a happy wife =a happy life, therefore he has little choice...
Wolf Avatar
November 17, 2019 at 3:55 PM
As they say, "Women are from Venus, Men are from Mars.." (Or is it the other way around; I forget)… btw, please note the phrase 'at times' in the poem... Usually the (wise) male/husband will go with the flow, so to speak... Smiles, Gershon
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