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Mistakes

I heard the thunder
above my contented place
as I accepted the sunshine
and left home
without an umbrella.

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Kim Merryman

April 4, 2014 at 9:05 PM

The weather is tricky! Congrats on your win, Nikkia! Love Kim

Nikkia Roberts

April 5, 2014 at 8:10 AM

Kim, thank you! It reminds me of that old quote: "Success is when PREPARATION meets opportunity." We've got to be prepared, less we fail. Love ya!

Sara Kendrick

April 4, 2014 at 3:59 PM

Ahh!! Wonder if it rained..Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Nikkia Roberts

April 4, 2014 at 4:02 PM

It was a downpour, Sara! (smile) Thanks for the congrats. All the best to you and with your writing.

Skat A

April 3, 2014 at 10:26 PM

NIKKIA, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~

Nikkia Roberts

April 4, 2014 at 4:01 PM

Thanks Skat!!! Love you too!!

Poet Destroyer A

April 3, 2014 at 12:32 PM

Nikkia, :) Congratulations, wonderful winning Umbrella poem. Enjoyed my BFF's winning list..... luv LINDA

Nikkia Roberts

April 3, 2014 at 3:45 PM

Hey YOU! We're gonna be BFF's before it's all over...just you wait and see! :-)) You're amazing, thanks.

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 3, 2014 at 5:00 AM

My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, nikkia

Nikkia Roberts

April 3, 2014 at 3:44 PM

Dr. Ram! Thank you! I appreciate your support so much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 2, 2014 at 11:35 AM

- Hey Nikkia - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nikkia Roberts

April 3, 2014 at 3:43 PM

Thank you!! We are all in this together. So grateful to share my gift within a safe space.

Len Gasun

April 2, 2014 at 10:46 AM

My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Nikkia ! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora

Nikkia Roberts

April 3, 2014 at 3:42 PM

Leonora, a pleasure to come into community with you. Thanks for the kind words. Onward and Upward! :)