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Mistakes

The mistakes I've made, have burned inside me, they've changed me in so many ways. Like a melting ice cube full of poison. Coursing through my blood and contaminating it with its deadly venom. Leaving me paralyzed and hopeless. Then there's a light, at the end of a tunnel. But I'm no farther out than in.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/22/2009 4:15:00 PM
Much to think about in this poem. Good use of imagery to convey your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/19/2009 5:35:00 PM
I am diggin the last line.Very beautiful sad poem. =[ =]
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