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Mistake Turned Great

You entered my life By mistake I know But I didnt think My true feelings would show Oh how I wish You could hold me at night Oh how I wish You could hold me tight You changed my life This you dont know When I held the knife You made me let go I wanted to end it all And just make it go away But you wouldnt let me fall Although I was starting to frey When I say Im done And I wanna die I remember our fun And your beautiful green eyes I love you You changed my life in many ways If only you knew What more I want to say

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/16/2010 10:33:00 AM
beautiful write...sorry for your losss
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Date: 8/16/2010 6:47:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup..so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more..with luv..
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Date: 8/16/2010 5:10:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kimber. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:21:00 AM
Matters of the heart, let them know. People drift in and out of our lives that truly do make a difference. It is important to let them know, before iit is to late. Excellent piece.
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