Mistake Turned Great

You entered my life
By mistake I know
But I didnt think
My true feelings would show
Oh how I wish
You could hold me at night
Oh how I wish
You could hold me tight
You changed my life
This you dont know
When I held the knife
You made me let go
I wanted to end it all
And just make it go away
But you wouldnt let me fall
Although I was starting to frey
When I say Im done
And I wanna die
I remember our fun
And your beautiful green eyes
I love you
You changed my life in many ways
If only you knew
What more I want to say
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 10:33 AM
beautiful write...sorry for your losss
Sweetheart Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 6:47 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup..so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more..with luv..
Brown Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 5:10 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kimber. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Nutter Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 3:21 AM
Matters of the heart, let them know. People drift in and out of our lives that truly do make a difference. It is important to let them know, before iit is to late. Excellent piece.
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