Mistake of the Elf

The elf thought a wasp’s nest was a comfy place to hide Until those angry mud daubers decided to come back inside.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/31/2020 1:25:00 PM

haha, Clever!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/31/2020 2:09:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. I have mud daubers all over here.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 7/31/2020 7:57:00 AM

Caren, Beware the mud daubers, don't disturb their peace. Brave memories of Summer. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/31/2020 2:10:00 PM

They are always here during the summer - leaving their clay like nests when they leave for Florida.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/30/2020 1:13:00 PM

ouch! that would sting for sure! cute one, caren...

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/30/2020 1:17:00 PM

Thank you my friend. I was observing my porch mud daubers yesterday and bam....a little poem!