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If frantic was a paste sound illuminate time and space no right and no wrong circus the gap surround position is a door a path or missing objection if the morning came to soon ladder and glass pass like flags through a tunnel of more or less ideas to pass the time of laps of days that pass coming into a position how much to endure of it all to more or less to ask like to get from point A to point B As to say to flag down a stranger you would be my last leg metal to peddle is lunch and dinner in doors Who understand just mystery or what this world has in storage but the question That hold place what attraction feeling and emotion what is a mom and a dad And true advice one seek is it luck or is a putt Birdie!!!

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Date: 8/27/2016 3:05:00 PM
Hhmmm, certainly a bit of a mind-bender...But appealing...Yes, most appealing in a strange sort of way. Exceedingly well done, Louis! My best regards. :) john
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Louis Borgo
Date: 8/29/2016 8:38:00 AM
Abstract Poem, Louis.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things