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village is draped by curtain of choking cloud - it struggles to breathe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/22/2014 6:23:00 PM
Once again, nice poem. Just add an "e" to the end of "breath". You want the verb, not the noun.
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Date: 10/23/2013 4:33:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one..Very descriptive work..It has felt like that here some mornings lately.Sara
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Date: 10/22/2013 7:25:00 PM
Very interesting imagery. I very much liked this Haiku! Keep it up! Always, Laura
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Date: 10/21/2013 7:58:00 AM
Great images, Linda
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Date: 10/21/2013 7:23:00 AM
- Linda, very nice haiku !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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