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Mist

Mist; 
You fall, you crawl, you roll, 
And into people’s thoughts you seep, 
Like an uninvited dream 
Into foggy brains 
On the edge of sleep …
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May 29, 2023 at 1:50 AM
A captivating poem Clive and the misty haunting feel from the picture is perfect…..Love it! Debx
Blake Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Deb, your lovely comments are very much appreciated ~ Clive :)
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