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Mist

Early morning vapors emulate a lady's veil, diaphanous, a softly shifting secrecy; inconstant as the tide and deathly pale, feathering the lake in fragile mystery. Minstrels scarce can sing with proper import of the dawning of the day in violet haze; e'er we hear the skylark, nature's joyous consort, and sunshine bathes the fields with warming rays. First light is fully fledg'd, the veil is lifting, the surface shines, a vision sparkling bright; day fades to dark, again the morn comes drifting, as the mist sprawls like a spectre from the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/16/2010 11:31:00 PM
Loved this one, Keith.
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Date: 11/30/2008 4:33:00 PM
this is really good, wonderfully vivid
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Date: 11/29/2008 12:39:00 PM
This is spectacular and mysterious as mist itself - a flowing read, almost like a song of long ago...lovely, love, Kristin
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Date: 11/28/2008 2:53:00 PM
The imagery is awesome! What a creative poem. The rhyme work well. Thank you for sharing this well-written poem with us and for your encouraging words. Karen
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Date: 11/25/2008 7:23:00 AM
hehe That's okay! :) Thank you for the kind comment. :) Amy :)
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Date: 11/25/2008 7:15:00 AM
So lovely! I love the imagery you've used. I can see this in my mind, a hazy, mysterious early morning view. Very beautiful writing. God bless, Amy :)
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