Mississippi River Glow

Excellent poetry Jim.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

nicely penned, hot one here!

Can feel the rive close, Jim! Well written haiku. II had no time write more being too busy with everything before moving to Zittau in Saxonia. Thanks for your comments!....Gert

The spirits of Mark Twain, Huckleberry Finn and steamboats haunt the awesome "Mississippi River Glow," James. Love the reference to being cloacked by fog as the pelicans fly overhead. Great work, Jim! Love, Carolyn

What a beautiful Haiku you have written here James. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Great use of imagery, love the scene you captured JMG...Raul

What a lovely read, I feel as though for a moment I was transported away from the dull surroundings of my desk to the surreal atmosphere of the Mississippi River. ~KC~

i can feel the Missisippi River glowing with fireworks,can nearly feel myself in that beautiful view,excellent Haiku--his weekend we had "Notte Bianca"in Malta,the white night and it was beautifu,fireworks,art ,music,...but oq theMississippi is the Mississippi,beautifu-Charma

Hi Jim, Love this Haiku. Thanks Marty

You have painted a picture that I can see in my mind. Great job, James ! Carrie

Awesome images in this perfect Haiku, James! What a beautiful picture you have painted in my mind! Love, Robin

I haven't seen white pelicans only the brown colored ones. I bet they are beauties that is unless they ride over your windshield with a fully stomach. I love the color of sumac in the fall the red is so great. Keep writing. Sara

so serene..Love the haiku no worries over my verse Greet the Sun..it was just a Bi....tc...h about how so many folks hide in books looking for answers instead of living their own lifes. Sometimes i feel like the readers are "bloodsucker?" Light & Love

Love this awe inspiring Haiku! Great job.Love the last line.... Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia