Mississippi

MISSISSIPPI M y love for the magnolia tree I s a botanist dream. S omething special to see S o white, magnolia gleams! I f I had a choice of trees, S omeone suggestion was S pruce, I would say I like my State’s tree. P lus the bloom is as white as the clouds. P lease give me the magnolia I adore right now. Mississippi is where I am from – Old Magnolia. M y love of the mocking bird I s a bird watchers dream. S omething special to see S irens singing! I f I had a choice of birds, S omeone suggested one different, S uch as the Three Wrens, I would say I like my State’s bird. P lus, they sing a beautiful song. P lease, the mocking bird that I adore. Mississippi is where I am from – Old Magnolia & the Mocking Bird. M y home is The Magnolia State. I ce is what winter creates. S pectacular the crystal glows. S nowflakes hang from the trees. I cicles drip. S nowfall has appeared. S unshine is desired. I ce water caught in a bucket. P itchers of Kool-Aid to drink P eople are feeling holistic. I mages of happiness and a change of seasons Mississippi is where I am from. Old Magnolia, the Mocking Bird, my home sweet home… __________________________________________/ Sponsor: Kim Merryman Contest Name: Tell Me About Where You're From Form: A Triple Acoustic 5th place
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Oyewole Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 1:44 PM
Great write plus lovely to read. Well done on this quill. Big congrats to you on your win in the contest.
Walker  Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Thanks for your congratulations Abdulhafeez... Verlena
Johnson Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 6:38 PM
Great praise for your beloved home. I would like to visit Mississippi. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Walker  Avatar
April 22, 2014 at 12:29 AM
thanks joyce for your supportive remarks... Verlena
Mehta Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:11 AM
Oh, just passed thro' Mississippi often. Write full of feelings and emotions, Congrats on the win, Verlena
Walker  Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Thanks Ram... Verlena
Nair Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 5:12 AM
Hi Verlana, it is unbelievable that where I have struggled to write one, you have come up with three. remarkable. keep up the good work..Congrats to you dear!!
Garg Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 8:07 AM
I totally agree with Nair. I also struggled hard to write one.....Kudos....Congrats
Walker  Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 5:14 AM
Thanks Jag... Verlena
A. Sharma Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Awesome write Verlena ,,, great win on great poetry,, congrats !
Walker  Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 2:25 AM
Thanks Upma.. Verlena
Green Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 3:35 AM
Oh Beautiful! Definite high placement there. You made the place sound like heaven.,
Walker  Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 4:33 AM
Thanks for your support Amy... Verlena
Ink-U-Script Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 9:36 PM
Excellent Acrostic Poem....you had me smiling when you mentioned the Pitchers of Kool-Aid...lol...Enjoyed your poem.
Walker  Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 9:48 PM
Thanks Pace... Verlena
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