Missing You

I kept a little token For when you were here I forgot as maybe everyone does Time I looked today and remembered You were real and I can’t ever find you again I wonder if you will ever remember me Yet we will never meet again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 5, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Hello Tahira, your last line of yur poem is isad. havea nice evening my friend.
Imtiaz Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 5:52 AM
your short words made a big impact on feelings, mind and heart........truly expression of the feelings
Imtiaz Avatar
March 3, 2018 at 5:52 AM
your short words made a big impact on feelings, mind and heart........truly expression of the feelings
Tacito Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 2:46 PM
I know this feeling. Almost to die twice: Once when they're gone, Twice when they're forgotten. Powerful lines.
Parveen Avatar
February 25, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Thank you for you lovely comment Drake:)
Williams Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 6:54 AM
The knitted tea cosy brought a tear to my eye as well as your lovely poem Tahira. My mother loved to knit. Excellent poem, filled with emotion ...Maria
Parveen Avatar
February 22, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Thank you Maria, for your beautiful comment:)
Bateman Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 2:02 PM
Tahira, Yes -- this one is sad. And a reflection of how life goes at times. Excellent Write!! Best Wishes, Gary
Parveen Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:30 PM
Yes it is a sad one Gary:)
Parker Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 7:47 PM
and yet every time you think of them you are meeting
Parveen Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 7:27 AM
you're right Frederic :)
One Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 2:44 PM
A sad poem.... such is life sadly..
Parveen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 2:57 PM
It really is:)
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 12:42 PM
- A heartbreaking poem, beautiful Tahira :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parveen Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 12:57 PM
It is Sunshine smile, :) hugs //Tahira
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