Missing You

Wake up at Midnight
Dreaming about your sweet eyes
Lost in the valley of dreams 
Hold you with my hands 
Wishing to choose other path 
Desiring to turn back time









For Oh How I Miss You Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Cecelia Hopkins-Drewer
August 13, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Krampe Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:37 PM
Congrats on your placement, Nayda.
Barden Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:47 PM
This is beautiful, Nayda - congratulations! :-)
Negron Flores Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:39 PM
Thank you Greg.
Sands Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Congratulations Nayda :)
Negron Flores Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 5:25 PM
Regrets captured well Nayda.
Negron Flores Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 7:40 PM
Indeed Cecelia. Thank you.
Onclaud Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 4:18 PM
nayda,such a pensive work with much longing.. one of your aces is the tanka.. lovely!..huggs
Negron Flores Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 4:36 PM
Thank you Nette.
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