Missing You

Compared with vast sea, water from elsewhere is nothing,
And only the clouds of Wushan are true clouds touching.
I don‘t even have the mood to look at the flowers in view,
Partly because of practicing Taoism and  partly of you.
(Tran.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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October 20, 2019 at 3:25 PM
Nice .
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October 22, 2019 at 5:10 AM
Hi, Silent, very kind of you to make comment on my little poem. Have a nice day. Charlie
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October 20, 2019 at 9:46 AM
Lovely, Charlie.
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October 22, 2019 at 5:08 AM
Hello, Line, Thank you for your comment. Charlie
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