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Missing the Mark

("Earth", 1979, original pen and ink)

Missing the Mark

As they say, this world is full of sin:
the meaning of Life a target we continually miss
out of carelessness and habit.

This is the root of crime, which theft is the most basic form of;
murder, rape, arson, kidnap, assault and robbery, even defamation, 
all involving stealing something that isn’t ours and wasn’t freely given.

Justified perhaps in the name of justice, personal or social,
or simply survival, we habitually treat the world as ours
for the taking and defending.

But beneath this action of theft
lies the outlook of dishonesty;
the motivation and intention to fool others and ourselves.

This is the lie that the world is full of,  
the flaw in our nature that causes us to habitually
miss the mark.

Ignorance, after all, 
implies we are ignoring
something we know to be true.

The one thing about habits is while they are tough to break
they are only formed by repeated actions and so able to be changed 
through different actions when we find a different ground to start from.

Of course, this is easier said than done, but maybe the trick to the training
doesn’t rely on someone telling us what or how to do,
but simply making the target so close it is impossible to miss.

So close it can be touched with our finger
held in the palm of our hand, 
or kissed with our lips.

These are the little things
we can, and do, do
that make all the difference.

This may seem to take all the sport out of it
after all, what is the point of a target if it isn’t a challenge,
if it is already right at hand.

But what is the point of living 
a life of pain and frustration
from habitually missing the mark.

If we’re honest with ourselves we’ll be grateful
for the bird in hand, and let the two in the bush
go about living their own lives.

(12/8/23)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 12/9/2023 6:30:00 AM
An excellent narrative poem James.. I really enjoyed reading about your perspective..
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James Moore
Date: 12/12/2023 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Silent One!
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