Missing Someone

There is something missing
I could never put my finger on it
I write to get out affection
But all of it just bottles up
I don't know what to do
I want someone that I can talk to
About everything
And not just a friend
I want it to be a girl
A girl is what I write for
Someone I can adore

It doesn't even have to be serious
I just want someone that I can talk with
In a flirtatious way
Call babe and all those names
Compliment her every time I see her
But apparently I am not desperate enough
Because there are people who like me
But I do not like back
I am too picky in my life
But I have this right
Yet every night I plight
That I need some girl to bring light
To my day
Someone to which I can say
"I love you"

(On my myspace also)
Copyright 2009
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-Matthan C. Atherton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/1/2009 5:02:00 AM
Matthan, thank you for the enjoyable read this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2009 7:30:00 PM
never thought anyone could feel the same way as me. i love your poem and dont lose hope, she'll show up when u least expect it
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Date: 9/30/2009 12:57:00 PM
Just having someone to whom you can talk and share time can bring great joy to our lives, Matthan. I hope you find your true love! Best Wishes, Carolyn
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