Missing Piece

My love, all I see, 
Is the shadow of you here. 
I can't move on now 
Because you left me empty, 
And you hold that missing piece. 

For the "Just one Tanka" Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Tidd Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 1:18 PM
Nice. I like this one.
Carris Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 6:25 PM
Thank you
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