Missing Max

Your silhouette softens
Your scent weakens
Yet I still ache in your shadow

I ponder quiet moments
If it could be possible
That you may still be around

I know it's not probable
In truth filled reality
But I cannot bear to not hope

Your trinkets lay dormant
As permanent knife wounds
Sometimes I'm unable to cope

Washing up I heard whispers
Of you calling (kazy)
Bubbles so beautiful

Observe
Colourfilled
Therapy

Float.......


(My darling sister ... miss you most xxxx)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/26/2012 9:44:00 AM
so sad...a great tribute to her. I liked "trinkets lay dormant" and "colourfilled therapy" :) p.s. thanks for your comment on my clerihew. I didn't know if I had done it right or not, since it was my first one.
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Karen Deeks
Date: 9/26/2012 10:25:00 AM
hello .....thanks for your comments on this and as far as the criteria was laid down .... you seemed to fill it perfectly.....thanks again haren
Date: 6/6/2012 1:24:00 PM
Your ending is perfect. If I understand what you are saying, I'm sorry. "trinkets lay dormant" is so moving. love, Kathy
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Date: 6/4/2012 5:27:00 PM
Hi,Karen i love it!!!!!!!!!!!,,,Today I'm reading poems from my aunt PD's account, hope you don't mind. Sincerely pd's niece SYLVIA}i{
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